寫解析的作文(匯集3篇)。

在日常生活或是工作學習中，大家一定都接觸過作文吧，作文是經過人的思想考慮和語言組織，通過文字來表達一個主題意義的記敘方法。如何寫3篇有思想、有文采的作文呢？下面是小編整理的2025年6月英語六級作文解析及滿分作文，僅供參考，歡迎大家閱讀。

寫解析的作文 篇1

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

命題解析

本題要求評論美國作家Napoleon Hill的一句名言：“如果你不能做偉大的事情，那就以偉大的方式做小事?！辈⒁笈e出一到兩個例子支持你的觀點。顯而易見，本題考查做小事的重要性。

本題其實來自于2013年6月的四級真題：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

在這道四級題目中，兒子問父親：“爸爸，我有點擔心核廢料的處理?！备赣H回答：“如果你能到了這兒的垃圾桶，你能做任何事情。”題目為做大事之前做小事的重要性，應了一句古話：“一屋不掃，何以掃天下?”2024年6月的這道六級寫作真題其實與上述四級真題一脈相承，幾乎是原題重考。

寫作思路指導：

本題第一段應該通過做大事和做小事的關系引出主題;

第二段可以進行舉例論證，列舉自己身邊的'例子或社會熱點例子來支持自己的觀點，如雷鋒、焦裕祿等等;

第三段可以進行歸納結論或提出建議措施：大部分人都沒有做大事的可能性，但細心做好每件小事就是成功。

參考范文：

Success is something that many people strive for, but that not everyone among us attains. When we consider the various factors that play a role in determining whether a person is successful in life, ambition and action are wtwo of the first to come to mind. Just as American writer Napoleon Hill put it, “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ”

Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice. A young person who aspires to be a great chef might decide to buy some cookbooks, spend weekends practicing and refining his culinary techniques, or take on a part-time job at a local restaurant. On the other hand, if he simply end up spending all has spare time surfing the Internet or playing video games, neither of which would give him the skills or experience needed to succeed.

In conclusion, doing great things and doing small things are both essential in determining whether we flourish or fall behind. The former gives us the drive and direction to move forward, while the latter enables us to implement our vision and “make things happen”. In combination, they represent the winning formula that will put us firmly on the road to success.

參考譯文

成功是許多人所追求的目標，但這個目標非每個人都能實現。在考慮到決定一個人是否成功的因素時，我們最先想到的兩個因素世雄心與行動。正如美國作家拿破侖 希爾所說：“如果你不能做偉大的事情，那就以偉大的方式做小事。”

可以給出無數的例子，但這個就足夠了。一個渴望成為偉大廚師的人，或許會決定買一些烹飪書籍，或是把整個周末的時間用于改造自己的烹調技巧，亦或是在當地的一家餐館里從事一份兼職工作。相反，如果他只是將所有的閑暇時間用于上網或玩電子游戲，這些都不能為他帶來成功所需的技巧或經驗。

總之，做大事和做小事都是決定我們成功與否的重要因素。前者給與我們前進的動力和方向，后者使我們能夠積極主動地實現愿望。而把兩種因素結合起來，才是我們走上成功之路的秘訣。

寫解析的作文 篇2

Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on innovation/creation/invention. Your essay should include the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation/creation/invention. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

第一段：提出問題，引出創新的話題

第二段：分析問題，具體解析創新的原因，即創新的.重要性

第三段：解決問題，具體解析鼓勵創新的措施

先講解及格版作文思路：

第一段，可以仿寫“社會熱點題”的首段寫法，用一個with引導時間狀語，作為大背景，進一步轉到創新的話題。即 with the rapid development of the society, more and more people begin to realize the importance of innovation. Such as, a lot of new things appear in our daily life.

第二段，按照課堂中所論證的總分結構，可以從兩個或者三個層面論證為什么我們應該創新，也就是創新的重要性。比如，個人，集體，社會。為了體現邏輯性，可以用相關連接詞連接。具體如下：there are many reasons for the importance of innovation. Firstly, for a person, if he has the spirit of innovation, he can be not satisfied with his current situation, and keep going until he succeeds. secondly, for a team, creation can increase its efficiency. thirdly, this kind of spirit can help the society develop faster and faster, so that there are more and more new things which can enrich our daily life.

第三段：按照課堂中所論證的總分總結構，可以從兩個層面論證我們應該如何創新，也就是鼓勵創新的措施。比如，個人，政府。連接詞依舊繼續。具體如下：thus, it is very important for us to encourage innovation. On the one hand, we students should learn to be innovative in our daily life. On the other hand, governments could set some laws and regulations to encourage innovation. Only in this way can we have a better life.

及格版作文

with the rapid development of the society, more and more people begin to realize the importance of innovation. Such as, a lot of new things appear in our daily life.

there are many reasons for the importance of innovation. Firstly, for a person, if he has the spirit of innovation, he can be not satisfied with his current situation, and keep going until he succeeds. secondly, for a team, creation can increase its efficiency. thirdly, this kind of spirit can help the society develop faster and faster, so that there are more and more new things which can enrich our daily life.

thus, it is very important for us to encourage innovation. On the one hand, we students should learn to be innovative in our daily life. On the other hand, governments could set some laws and regulations to encourage innovation. Only in this way can we have a better life. (151words)

另附一篇高分作文賞析，結構和內容上類似，只是在語言表達上更為精彩：

Along with the highly advanced society, the importance of innovation has been attached more and more significance in our country. There abound numerous novel gadgets in our daily life.

There exist countless contributors for this phenomenon mentioned above, while the following might be the most critical ones. To begin with, seen from the individual’s perspective, once equipped with innovation, he could be compelled to be never satisfied with his status quo, which guarantees his personal success. Apart from that, innovation is the main driving force behind increased competitiveness. To be the unrivaled one in the whole world, a nation has to keep abreast with time, ensuring the dominance of creation.

To put all into a nutshell, it goes without saying that innovation does matter. On the one hand, relevant authorities are supposed to set up relevant rules and regulations so as to highlight innovation. on the other hand, we each individual should cultivate this kind of viewpoint since our childhood, by which means we could be bestowed with a bright and promising future! (175words)

寫解析的作文 篇3

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

命題分析

本題要求評論英國教士Thomas Fuller的一句名言：“知識是一種財富，但實踐是打開財富的鑰匙?！辈⒁罂梢越o出一個或兩個例子來闡述你的觀點。顯而易見，本題考查理論知識與實踐技能之間的關系，這是雅思[微博]寫作反復考察過的話題。

寫作思路解析

1、本題首段應該通過理論知識與實踐技能之間的關系引出主題;

2、第二段可以進行舉例論證，列舉自己參加兼職打工、志愿者活動等親身經驗證明實踐技能的重要性;

3、尾段可以進行歸納結論或提出建議措施：一方面我們應該努力積累理論知識，另一方面我們應該積極培養自己的實踐技能。

參考范文：

Would you want a doctor to operate on you who has only learned about operations from a textbook? The answer to this is obviously a resounding “No!” Knowledge gained from books must always be complemented by knowledge gained from actual experience, to be of real value.

For me actually practicing a particular action or experiment myself and experiencing the result, leaves a much deeper and lasting impression than what I get from simply reading or listening. If I read about how to write an essay or listened to someone talk about writing an essay, I still wouldn’t feel that I knew how to write an essay until I wrote one for myself. It is the case, however, that writing the essay would be based on the methods I learned intellectually. The same can be said for other skills, like sports, for example. A person can know all the rules of a game, associated skills and strategies, but until that person gets on a court with a ball in motion, the theory remains flat, useless.

To sum up, as to theoretical knowledge and practical skills, the latter is certainly more important. Just as British churchman Thomas Fuller put it, “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.”

參考譯文

一個大夫只學過課本上的手術知識，叫他給你主刀你是否愿意?顯然，這個問題的答案是一聲響亮的“不”。書本知識要有實際價值，就必須同實踐經驗相結合。

對我來說，實踐某件事，或者說親自去嘗試某項活動并感受最后的`結果，要比讀書聽課給我留下的印象更深刻，更持久。如果只是讀到如何寫作，或是聽別人講解寫作方法，我覺得自己還是不會寫，非得親自寫一篇才行。當然，實際寫作中也會用到以前學過的寫作方法。掌握其他技能也是一個道理。以體育為例，一個人可以通曉所有的比賽規則和相關戰術技巧，但除非這個人上場打球，否則那堆理論就是呆板無用的。

總之，對于理論知識和實踐技能，相比之下，實踐經驗當然更重要。正如英國教士托馬斯 富勒所說：“知識是一種財富，但實踐是打開財富的鑰匙?！?/p>